Talk:Introduction/Choosing a realm

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Hrm. I hate to be territorial about this, but this really doesn't fit with the rest of the roleplay, either in style or format. I was very careful not to specify the gender of the player's character, and not to mention real realms or islands.

Obviously, I can't get away without mentioning islands, but it might be a good idea to set this aside as a separate roleplay, occurring at a different time. --Dolohov 26 July 2005 15:51 (CEST)

Then again, having something is better than having nothing. People make modifications to articles rather than writing a new one from scratch. ;-) --Tom 26 July 2005 17:25 (CEST)

For choosing a realm, it's kind of inevitable that you will have to bring up which islands there are. I was a bit iffy about adding the realms in the beginning, although you could change this to "The combined armies of the Far Eastern or the Southern Island realms" without a great deal of fuss. The other problems are merely stylistic. DorianGray 27 July 2005 12:04 (CEST)