Talk:Atamara News/Darka RS War

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I added a map of the political/military movements which led up to the war and the events outlined in this article. Jezralhm 11:25, 20 December 2006 (CET)

Very nicely done! --Habap 15:06, 20 December 2006 (CET)

Dielo

Eston refused passage to RedSpan... but that sure didn't stop High Marshal Dielo, did it? It is a bad omen when a general fails to follow instructions... or willfully ignores them. -Pizarro

--High Marshal Dielo had specific orders from King Tony, and no knowledge of Eston's position on the war. His job is not to decide what's going to happen, it's to make sure what's going to happen actually does (and in the most efficent manner). The first Estonian objection he heard was of their High Marshal relayed through King Tony.

Even better then. Now King Tony himself apparently is unconcerned with other realms' policies regarding right of passage. -Pizarro

Nice article

The article seems to cover all of the issues and present things from each side. The spelling and grammar do leave a bit to be desired, but it is still usually understandable. --Habap 14:52, 16 December 2006 (CET)

I have edited it for readability's sake. Jezralhm 17:44, 17 December 2006 (CET)
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