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Pretty good, Im going through it again and I see even more spelling mistakes, Im sorting them out for you! However, I have come across one sentence that completly bewildered me! I put a double bracket round the sentence and a comment after it. (Its under the heading 'Rii'). Ill surely do it with more sentences were I have the same problem! | Pretty good, Im going through it again and I see even more spelling mistakes, Im sorting them out for you! However, I have come across one sentence that completly bewildered me! I put a double bracket round the sentence and a comment after it. (Its under the heading 'Rii'). Ill surely do it with more sentences were I have the same problem! | ||
Keep it up its a great story. Admittedly not the best Ive read but its still a great story! I think the problem is that Im not in it.! =) | Keep it up its a great story. Admittedly not the best Ive read but its still a great story! I think the problem is that Im not in it.! =) | ||
Now go! Sort the comments I left in the text! | Now go! Sort the comments I left in the text! | ||
12th November 2005, 19.50 bmservertime: | |||
I have read the text again, and changed what you mentioned. | |||
--- [[User:PrinsSimon|PrinsSimon]] |
Latest revision as of 18:56, 12 November 2005
good initiative, i like it. But i have a question, trough wich Realms will you be traveling on your journey North?
this is my planned route:
Cagamir - Bolkenia - Eno - Brovyl - Epinotke - Elloranaal - Thromegor - Lopa - Enweilieos - Gorin - Vilbriil - Darhauyo - Zod - Tey Gren - Sheja - Vale - Wudenkin - Verdomite - Xerus - Junohep - Kell - Ossmat
And then the route might splitte
First option: Gemke - Pomatim - Bessimir - Pellan - Doatnu
Second Option: Ffangor- Baqua - Gethsemene - Sniika - Haji - Porl - Fianik - Jobo's Mouth - Vu dus Tumm -Zettermain
If you know any local special thingies, like guilds, temples, bars or whatever, you can always post it here and I will surely notice it when I pass the region. You may also do this of every region in Beluaterra, since I might write another book too, later on. Or I might say something about the special thingy in this book.
And another thing: I would be very happy if you would notice if I have written down something wrong. ;) -- PrinsSimon
Ghostly
Pretty good, Im going through it again and I see even more spelling mistakes, Im sorting them out for you! However, I have come across one sentence that completly bewildered me! I put a double bracket round the sentence and a comment after it. (Its under the heading 'Rii'). Ill surely do it with more sentences were I have the same problem! Keep it up its a great story. Admittedly not the best Ive read but its still a great story! I think the problem is that Im not in it.! =)
Now go! Sort the comments I left in the text!
12th November 2005, 19.50 bmservertime:
I have read the text again, and changed what you mentioned.
--- PrinsSimon