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What do you all think? The old page is at [[Introduction]]. --[[User:Dolohov|Dolohov]] 30 July 2005 23:42 (CEST) | What do you all think? The old page is at [[Introduction]]. --[[User:Dolohov|Dolohov]] 30 July 2005 23:42 (CEST) | ||
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+ | I like this very much, but I would love it if it were a little less elaborate. Remember that for the AOL generation anything that doesn't fit on one page is already half a book. | ||
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+ | The examples could be slightly reduced, and the wording be tightened. I'm sure we can save about 25% of the text without losing any meaning. | ||
+ | --[[User:Tom|Tom]] 1 August 2005 11:17 (CEST) |
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What do you all think? The old page is at Introduction. --Dolohov 30 July 2005 23:42 (CEST)
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I like this very much, but I would love it if it were a little less elaborate. Remember that for the AOL generation anything that doesn't fit on one page is already half a book.
The examples could be slightly reduced, and the wording be tightened. I'm sure we can save about 25% of the text without losing any meaning. --Tom 1 August 2005 11:17 (CEST)