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==Personal Versions of History==
 
No doubt the way that things happened will be viewed differently by different people. Let's not get into various biased accounts of events. Try and keep this page as factual as possible. If necessary, add an infobox or something, with your on personal, alternative version of events, and tag it as such. There's nothing wrong with having multiple versions, so long as we know where they come from. That way people can judge for themselves as to which version they can believe. --[[User:Indirik|Indirik]] ([[User talk:Indirik|talk]]), [[BattleMaster Wiki:Editors|Editor]] ([[BattleMaster Wiki:User-Editors Talk|talk]]) 17:03, 27 July 2009 (UTC)
 
No doubt the way that things happened will be viewed differently by different people. Let's not get into various biased accounts of events. Try and keep this page as factual as possible. If necessary, add an infobox or something, with your on personal, alternative version of events, and tag it as such. There's nothing wrong with having multiple versions, so long as we know where they come from. That way people can judge for themselves as to which version they can believe. --[[User:Indirik|Indirik]] ([[User talk:Indirik|talk]]), [[BattleMaster Wiki:Editors|Editor]] ([[BattleMaster Wiki:User-Editors Talk|talk]]) 17:03, 27 July 2009 (UTC)
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I've attempted to clean it up a bit. It certainly was a bit anti-Riombaran biased in the bit about the south... though it seems to me that Danaris maybe overdid his revisions. I have edited it to try and limit weasel words (probably missed several), and, where possible, present both views. Unfortunately the reality of that war is such that every issue has two very different and important sides... as the war is entirely about a theoretical and abstract issue of "sovereignty." Thus choice of words becomes exceptionally important. Whatever the case, my revision certainly isn't perfect, and certainly is wordy... but hopefully it is an improvement. [[User:Vellos|Vellos]] 03:46, 28 July 2009 (UTC)

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Personal Versions of History

No doubt the way that things happened will be viewed differently by different people. Let's not get into various biased accounts of events. Try and keep this page as factual as possible. If necessary, add an infobox or something, with your on personal, alternative version of events, and tag it as such. There's nothing wrong with having multiple versions, so long as we know where they come from. That way people can judge for themselves as to which version they can believe. --Indirik (talk), Editor (talk) 17:03, 27 July 2009 (UTC)

I've attempted to clean it up a bit. It certainly was a bit anti-Riombaran biased in the bit about the south... though it seems to me that Danaris maybe overdid his revisions. I have edited it to try and limit weasel words (probably missed several), and, where possible, present both views. Unfortunately the reality of that war is such that every issue has two very different and important sides... as the war is entirely about a theoretical and abstract issue of "sovereignty." Thus choice of words becomes exceptionally important. Whatever the case, my revision certainly isn't perfect, and certainly is wordy... but hopefully it is an improvement. Vellos 03:46, 28 July 2009 (UTC)