Talk:Beluaterra Travel Guide

good initiative, i like it. But i have a question, trough wich Realms will you be traveling on your journey North?

this is my planned route:

Cagamir - Bolkenia - Eno - Brovyl - Epinotke - Elloranaal - Thromegor - Lopa - Enweilieos - Gorin - Vilbriil - Darhauyo - Zod - Tey Gren - Sheja - Vale - Wudenkin - Verdomite - Xerus - Junohep - Kell - Ossmat

And then the route might splitte

First option: Gemke - Pomatim - Bessimir - Pellan - Doatnu

Second Option: Ffangor- Baqua - Gethsemene - Sniika - Haji - Porl - Fianik - Jobo's Mouth - Vu dus Tumm -Zettermain

If you know any local special thingies, like guilds, temples, bars or whatever, you can always post it here and I will surely notice it when I pass the region. You may also do this of every region in Beluaterra, since I might write another book too, later on. Or I might say something about the special thingy in this book.

And another thing: I would be very happy if you would notice if I have written down something wrong. ;) -- PrinsSimon

Ghostly

Pretty good, Im going through it again and I see even more spelling mistakes, Im sorting them out for you! However, I have come across one sentence that completly bewildered me! I put a double bracket round the sentence and a comment after it. (Its under the heading 'Rii'). Ill surely do it with more sentences were I have the same problem! Keep it up its a great story. Admittedly not the best Ive read but its still a great story! I think the problem is that Im not in it.! =)

Now go! Sort the comments I left in the text!

12th November 2005, 19.50 bmservertime:

I have read the text again, and changed what you mentioned.

--- PrinsSimon