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Just a suggestion. -- OOC [[User:Habap|Habap]] 20:25, 28 March 2007 (CEST) | Just a suggestion. -- OOC [[User:Habap|Habap]] 20:25, 28 March 2007 (CEST) | ||
| + | :Noted and changed - agreed with you as the word superordinate is a bit arcane. I must have felt the need to be a precocious narcissist. --[[User:Jezralhm|Jezralhm]] 20:34, 28 March 2007 (CEST) | ||
Revision as of 20:34, 28 March 2007
Superordinate
I noticed in your laws (after being directed there from the recent article about Haughty) that you use superordinate. While this is technically proper English, it is uncommon and at first glance appeared to be a mis-translation - being the opposite of subordinate. Scientists and philosophers would apparently use the words commonly, but most of us simple folk would not. (I had to look it up to see if it was a real word.) I would suggest rewording it to:
- Disrespecting superiors and insulting comrades are considered acts of high treason, punishable by being thrown into our Holy Volcano.
Just a suggestion. -- OOC Habap 20:25, 28 March 2007 (CEST)
- Noted and changed - agreed with you as the word superordinate is a bit arcane. I must have felt the need to be a precocious narcissist. --Jezralhm 20:34, 28 March 2007 (CEST)
